Ninja - DJ Sabala
My friend name is Ninja he is dead When you go in his room, its red It is unknown what he just said All you see is just his bedspread My opponent is the worst rapper in the country He could not grow anything but one tree My homies chilling out at the sea The battles of rap going like three I will crush his whole group of friends And post it on the internet for trends My friends are going to make his arm bend Soon, he will never have anyore attends DJ will always fight for the crown He would be the king of town I will not go in the ocean and drown Never made a face similar to a frown I like to make so much money in my wallet If I'd make more cash, maybe in the pocket Gonna be the 4th of July so get some rocket Making all of these songs so I can pop it I'm not a rapper who just can rhyme My verses are even more prime You Better not do any crimes Or the police will ring the chime My storyline of rap is very pro You have to not go any low The power goes out and glow Hear the sound of a crow The picture of the frame Don't make it real lame I'm not playing any game He never has shame When the police is surrounded They will be not compounded Missing child will be founded My friends had to do bounded When you hand someone flyers Make a deal to fix their tires Stay out of the forest fires It was a scam, they were liars End of the song and story This ain't finding dory I'm rich and have all the glory My guards protect the territory I found a contract with the service My whole friends were very nervous This deal had so much purpose After all that it is worthless Nothing beats the battle of the bands Please Tell everyone on your land I have some drumsticks in my hand Nobody uses old park sand This is the end of my rap lyrics and lines After that work, for while The fire shines The big tree was very tall and had pines And breath the preference to the vines
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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
@rapfame_ar_team don't worry, I'll work on my voice and timing as fast as possible
@Real4Beats I'm surprised about my first song
@prodigalson2 thank you so much :)
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Hey @franciscothegodofps4! Thanks for sharing 'Ninja - DJ Sabala' with us! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Your vocals are a little high, could you put 'em down a little bit? Your voice sounds a bit fuzzy, could you try recording closer to the mic? You may wanna work on timing a bit so that you sound the best over the beat. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
I feel it! 🤜🤛 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥