Harder (21:07)
Screaming out for help I’m crying please someone save me ye I don’t think this life ting is for me everything happens for a reason maybe it’s meant to be I’m just trapped in this little box someone let me out I wanna be free my hearts been shattered torn apart I can bearly brief so I have a purpose do I really have a worth all I wanted was happiness but somehow that’s some thing I don’t deserve fighting depression for 4 years i want it to disappear it’s getting worse I was my mums blessing but I really living a curse I’m crying my eyes out god please listen to me I’m begging and pleading take me out of this misery I’m dying inside my heart is bleeding I’m lying here staring at the ceiling writing songs and getting all up in my feelings she broke my heart I’m so hurt I’m bearly breathing imagine being so young and already wanting to die no one understands I’m hurting so much I wanna fly high I’m only doing this for my mother and farther na I can’t let them watch there last son get buried 6ft under I told god I want less pain and he keeps giving more I keep fighting demons in my head please help me end this war I just wanna be like how I was before I just wanna be happy with a family of my own my 24
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Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Hi @harriwright! Welcome to our feedback of 'Harder (21:07)'! Nice flow here - delivery is so important. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Work on developing original bars to help your tracks shine through. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Good morning brother I like the flow the rhythm is definitely there I think you need to work on delivery in rhyme scheme but other than that my brother is great stop by and check some of my work
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
I feel it! 🤜🤛 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Your bars? Lava. Flow? Volcanic. Too hot to handle! 🌋 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥