Hi @jakerattle!
Welcome to our feedback of 'Sleep On Me'!
We like the lyrics, they're put together real well.
Your vocals are a bit loud compared to the beat, put 'em down just a little for a perfect mix.
Good choice of beat! Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Hey now, you got it! We're real impressed with this.
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hi @jakerattle! Welcome to our feedback of 'Sleep On Me'! We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. Your vocals are a bit loud compared to the beat, put 'em down just a little for a perfect mix. Good choice of beat! Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Hey now, you got it! We're real impressed with this. We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Great π
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯