long journey
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take me around on journey. Do your thing I'ma do my thing. I'm willing to pay for the damages. people be talking like there be convictions. I'm filling the creep ambushers. You will never find me I got my own ambitions. I'm living the life of a reckon. Boss me around like legend. while I be eating the big meals you be just looking for refills. I just wanna be- one of the detailed. I mean-; what's the big deal. I'm holding my breath like retail; I got my own powers like I'm retained. Meet me in person in rickvill. dashit around like a big bill. I'm going sicko like real me. Give me a ten out of ten like I'm descent. TO BE CONTINUED: TO BE CONTINUED. That's how I do it. peace.
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take me around on journey. Do your thing I'ma do my thing. I'm willing to pay for the damages. people be talking like there be convictions. I'm filling the creep ambushers. You will never find me I got my own ambitions. I'm living the life of a reckon. Boss me around like legend. while I be eating the big meals you be just looking for refills. I just wanna be- one of the detailed. I mean-; what's the big deal. I'm holding my breath like retail; I got my own powers like I'm retained. Meet me in person in rickvill. dashit around like a big bill. I'm going sicko like real me. Give me a ten out of ten like I'm descent. TO BE CONTINUED: TO BE CONTINUED. That's how I do it. peace.
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Hey @mhlelinay! Thanks for sharing 'long journey' with us! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that. The lyrics are fire, nicely done! Great flow here - delivery is so important. The beat is dope and really works for this track. We're super impressed with this, you got talent! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
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