Hey @kevintrinidy!
Thanks for sharing 'united we stand' with us!
The beat is dope and really works for this track.
Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback!
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: On point π― Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
Hey @kevintrinidy! Thanks for sharing 'united we stand' with us! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. This track is too short, please share something a bit longer so we can give proper feedback! Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
I feel it! π€π€ Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯