Last day alive
The time is tiking. The end is near. some rappers don't understand me. But if this is last day I'm live then I wouldn't hesitant. I would just sit down enjoy the view. No running no stress put on some last day is breath taking. asteroid hit the planet . everybody screaming trying to run away but nah I'm just chilling .I rather die slowly uncontemt at least I lived a life that was uncomentment. people be thinking that I'm crazy course I'm wearing sun glasses on the last day. look it breath taking. you can't understand the things that I'm going through right now. So I better explain it mathematically divided and condemned. Course that's the reason why I don't like people. look I'm just gonna stick to the topic. Back when I was sitting on chair of shame. looking Like I got it all figured out . But I guess that's how I live it . I'm out. peace
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The time is tiking. The end is near. some rappers don't understand me. But if this is last day I'm live then I wouldn't hesitant. I would just sit down enjoy the view. No running no stress put on some last day is breath taking. asteroid hit the planet . everybody screaming trying to run away but nah I'm just chilling .I rather die slowly uncontemt at least I lived a life that was uncomentment. people be thinking that I'm crazy course I'm wearing sun glasses on the last day. look it breath taking. you can't understand the things that I'm going through right now. So I better explain it mathematically divided and condemned. Course that's the reason why I don't like people. look I'm just gonna stick to the topic. Back when I was sitting on chair of shame. looking Like I got it all figured out . But I guess that's how I live it . I'm out. peace
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Hi @mhlelinay! Welcome to our feedback of 'Last day alive'! We think the delivery is fire, keep it up. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! Your vocals are real quiet compared to the beat, put 'em way up to get a perfect mix. The beat is fire, awesome choice. This is super chill, a real nice vibe. Keep grinding! We can see you got what it takes, just some small tweaks and this track will be total fire. It was dope listening to your music, share with us again for feedback! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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