laugh out loud

Name: laugh out loud
Description: I came back so I'm doing 3 times a day but they will come and come just know that

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I came back so I'm doing 3 times a day but they will come and come just know that

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TyroneBars

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5 years ago

I came back so I'm doing 3 times a day but they will come and come just know that

Adamiyat iman

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Rap Fame A&R

5 years ago

Yo @tyronebars! Waddup - let's take a look at 'laugh out loud '! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The beat is dope and really works for this track. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

Garry Teague

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

🥇SLOP 👑ONE🔊🔊⭐️

5 years ago

Raw AF ⛽️⛽️🔪🗡 #slopchecknmarks

KROOK COBAIN

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

(RSR) Ax Man

4 months ago

BLESSED 🙏 TOO HOT 🚒 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥