Yo @o16ba95jva!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'voloco_track_1624202394000'!
Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track.
Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Try practising effects more to see how they work best.
The beat is dope and really works for this track.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
π²ππ²π₯π₯π₯ Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
good work...check me back #IKIMπ
Yo @o16ba95jva! Waddup - let's take a look at 'voloco_track_1624202394000'! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Try practising effects more to see how they work best. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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You UP π Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
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Laying down the law, track by track! π Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯