thanks yall I'm working off a burner celly off chattr n sum dollar store headys sorry for the low quality if yall got some tips to make it higher quality for cheap I'm all ears, God bless and thanks for the views 🙏😬
Yo @novestgodbless!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'better daze'!
We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story.
Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way.
The beat is fire, nice choice.
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥
thanks yall I'm working off a burner celly off chattr n sum dollar store headys sorry for the low quality if yall got some tips to make it higher quality for cheap I'm all ears, God bless and thanks for the views 🙏😬
good job good words
Yo @novestgodbless! Waddup - let's take a look at 'better daze'! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Your voice is a bit quiet in the mix, you may wanna put it up a little. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The beat is fire, nice choice. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Great 🎉
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥