MASS SHOOTING
Wearing all black with red and blue hair Profiled by security while people stop and stare Don't mess with us we might shoot the mall up or maybe the movie theater want to hear something even weirder I got the idea from a movie that moved me maybe in the wrong Direction The Good The Bad and The Ugly With my Smith & Wesson With no Wars to fight we get real bored at night So we sit around and we just make some shit up Cuz the mother fucking Dow Jones is looking for a come up 6 feet in the dirt but only God can judge us In a church at Mass shootings from a crazed man in a mask shooting Thinking he's the Punisher but what's his punishment Take out him fishing with shoes made from cement Church is supposed to be a holy scared space but If we let fear win then we let them take that away He used his car as his weapon Killing Heather Hyer in seconds May she rest in peace in the beloved community in thats up in heaven Home grown terrorism Red white black blue division When everyone loses their minds there's no such thing as winning and Were all Americans cant we stop all the division Holding hands in harmony with no need for the army If everyone in the whole world decided to put their guns down The internal world war would be won now If you talk like this you should dress like that If you dress like that you should act like this Classism sexism and the color of your skin It shouldn't matter but it does in this mess we're in Radicalize this and analyze that If it doesn't feel right it's under attack When we live in a world of alternative facts A non-conventionalist at a Convention of Ethics A True Believer thats amongst Skeptics So full of shit that you got sepsis There's never gonna be enough antiseptic To save you from drowning in lies spouting and demons shouting Leave you doubting and pouting in a room thats mother fucking crowded With all the things that make you hate and every single one of your lifes mistakes and Destroying whatever it is that you create
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Yo @even1! Waddup - let's take a look at 'MASS SHOOTING'! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Using headphones will really improve the quality of your track! The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. Play around in your studio to find out how best to use different effects. We can see your potential, just put a bit more time into your next track! The beat is fire, nice choice. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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