life is hard
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•12 Jun 2021
w9rdl hook world is not my home am stuck I need Yuu lord I want Yu in my life verse life is hard hope I will make it its a risk but I will take it This world is not my home Im juss passin thru my treasure are laid up somewhere beyond the blue the angel becke me from now from heavens open doors I can't feel at home in this world anymore lord You Know I have no friend like You if world not my home then Lord what will I do feeling like am living stuckin a basement am just tryinn to get a higher replacement but life is Hard
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @somensson! Thanks for sharing 'life is hard' with us! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Make sure to use headphones to improve the sound of your track. Practice coming up with original rhymes to create a fresh sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. The beat is fire, nice choice. Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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