Darknight2005

the city of war

Darknight2005
the city of war

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11 Jun 2021

so many people killing each other this is the city of war everyone fighting over money i don't know y but guess what this the city of war there no kindness around the world that is y I was born with no respect I've been raging all day and night my grandma told me kindness follows you but i try to be nice but they get me to that rage i really tryed again and again but no respect so i don't have respect no more i give up so i said no more Mrs nice guy and so i walked home and then i got in a fight with my own enemy i don't start fights but I will finish one and I can't win them all everywhere I go there's always violence no one helping stealing from stores that breaks the law witches nobody care it's like the purge is here they be shootin stabbing fighting and I wish the violence would stop but it's the city of war what u got say it's the city of war u gotta learn how to servive in the streets i don't care what they say or do I'm just looking out for me if ur not my homies then don't worry about it this is war u people are killing each other i can never agree but it's not my fault this is war nigga i don't respect my enemy i don't show respect at all if they disrespect me i don't respect them at all homie u didn't want the world to be fighting but it's time that we fight for everything but we want the violence to stop it can never end this is war we make it out of the war we have to survive no matter what they say or do

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3 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

3 years ago

Hi @darknight.2760! Welcome to our feedback of 'the city of war'! We liked the idea behind the track, real cool story. Your vocals are a little quiet, could you put 'em up a little bit? Practice delivery to help move along your lyrics. The recording quality is quite low, it would be great to improve it somehow. The beat is dope and really works for this track. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team

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