Wassup @grimlogic,
Thank you for sharing 'Grim Logic - Grim Logistics ' with our community ๐ฅ. Here is a little feedback from us:
Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. โจ
Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Good choice of beat! ๐ผ
The audio quality isn't the best, there's lots going on in the mix and lots of conflicting sounds, it sounds a little chaotic and distracts from your bars! But speaking of bars they certainly sound good on this one, you have som nice satisfying rhyme schemes and lots of quotable bars - that's definitely an area you're comfortable in!
With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค
We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Grim Logic - Grim Logistics #GrimLogic #GrimLogistics
subscribe to my YouTube channel please Bars: Great ๐ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
good vibes good flow stay lit stay grinding ๐ช Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
everything from beat to vocals are to loud an distorted Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: On point ๐ฏ
your word play was crazy man ๐ฏ Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
keep going ๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช๐ช Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: On point ๐ฏ Impression: Good ๐
use head phone's sound better keep grinding Bars: On point ๐ฏ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Great ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
#tasteofheaven Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Great ๐ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ
Wassup @grimlogic, Thank you for sharing 'Grim Logic - Grim Logistics ' with our community ๐ฅ. Here is a little feedback from us: Your rhymes are coming on, keep that up. โจ Your delivery is super clean, this is sounding good. ๐ถ You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Good choice of beat! ๐ผ The audio quality isn't the best, there's lots going on in the mix and lots of conflicting sounds, it sounds a little chaotic and distracts from your bars! But speaking of bars they certainly sound good on this one, you have som nice satisfying rhyme schemes and lots of quotable bars - that's definitely an area you're comfortable in! With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. ๐ค We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! ๐ All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope ๐ฅ Delivery: Dope ๐ฅ Impression: Dope ๐ฅ