Yo @luyandambambo!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'Mary Jane'!
The beat is fire, nice choice.
Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out.
Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it!
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Yo @luyandambambo! Waddup - let's take a look at 'Mary Jane'! The beat is fire, nice choice. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. Sweet timing, you're ridin the beat real nice. Just a few little things and this track will be there, you got it! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
@luyandambambo love this bro!! You got real bars!!!
ok u can RAP rap broski....& Mary jane is my best friend
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