Yo @nicolemarshaa!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'TheBoilerRoom (05:24)'!
Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together.
Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential!
The beat is fire, nice choice.
Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
if you could when it's convenient for you send me good food for thoughts . Because unfortunately these jackal be trying to make me think I'm crazy .. Nevertheless tell me how my back LOOKS .. NO SUCKER HERE!!
to be truthful I was in a state of mind like tried of being sick of tried fighting those evildoers that trying to stop my shine..π€π basically in too forms of difference between the two boundaries the universe allows us a second chance with God GOOD GRACE . dig into it a little bit deeper when human being are sick π· throwing up β help take away release adding unlikely preservative 2nd version throw up β is never given up ...Bare with me note it takes a paragraph just to say a sentence . That's why I grateful for your lyrics and message .
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Yo @nicolemarshaa! Waddup - let's take a look at 'TheBoilerRoom (05:24)'! Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Put a bit more time into your next track stop make the most of your potential! The beat is fire, nice choice. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Great π
if you could when it's convenient for you send me good food for thoughts . Because unfortunately these jackal be trying to make me think I'm crazy .. Nevertheless tell me how my back LOOKS .. NO SUCKER HERE!!
to be truthful I was in a state of mind like tried of being sick of tried fighting those evildoers that trying to stop my shine..π€π basically in too forms of difference between the two boundaries the universe allows us a second chance with God GOOD GRACE . dig into it a little bit deeper when human being are sick π· throwing up β help take away release adding unlikely preservative 2nd version throw up β is never given up ...Bare with me note it takes a paragraph just to say a sentence . That's why I grateful for your lyrics and message .