Hey @seakay!
Thanks for sharing 'Space ship' with us!
Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track.
Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up.
Dope beat, really works for this track!
Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Hey @seakay! Thanks for sharing 'Space ship' with us! Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. Your vocals are a bit quiet compared to the beat, put 'em up a little for a perfect mix. Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique sound. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Dope beat, really works for this track! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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