Yo @lilyeezyy!
Waddup - let's take a look at 'π₯BANGπ₯'!
We like the rhyming, it's tight.
Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way.
The beat is fire, nice choice. There's so much energy in your delivery, awesome!! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there.
Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team
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Ay this shit fire
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The AYE was enough for me π₯π₯π₯ Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Great π Impression: Dope π₯
Yo @lilyeezyy! Waddup - let's take a look at 'π₯BANGπ₯'! We like the rhyming, it's tight. Practice writin' unique lyrics that will make your music really stand out. Work on delivery to make sure your bars are heard in a dope way. The beat is fire, nice choice. There's so much energy in your delivery, awesome!! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great π Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Great π Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
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Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
OK I see you Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Dope π₯
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Moving in silence, but your music speaks volumes! π Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Dope π₯ Delivery: Dope π₯ Impression: Dope π₯
Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―