JChic2020
JChic2020

Nightmare

Nightmare
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04 Mar 2021

#rapfame #bminterviewer #smr #dgr #nightmare #explicit #vivid #1iy2 #2021 #horror #dream #sleep #scary (Lyrics) Now I lay me down to sleep I pray the lord my soul to keep if I die before I wake I pray the lord my soul to take amen as I go into a sleeping state i know im in for a big mistake now in a dream, what's going to be my fate everything spinning out of control need to get it straight in this spiral in this roll denial eating at me, along with hate, attacking my soul forever falling in this hole  wait let me get out of this, that's my goal seeking how now that's my role must get ahold of this, grab ahold grab ahold grab ahold of myself of my life dust off that shelf of what can come back to bite meaning what I gotta do is choose to do the right with all my being with all my soul and with all my might life goes by each and everyday and every single freaking night it's a struggle it's a fight that's outta sight when I close my eyes to go to sleep in the night where and when i tend to dream see all these horrors that make me scream full of fright so damn vivid is the scene in my mind the internal screen flashing before my eyes all the lies in disguise of what seems to be so damn real so realize I'm telling you it's surreal not a prize this sleeping dreamy ordeal every bit of it I can feel so real so feel it if you dare it's that nightly scare it's called a fucking nightmare so go ahead and dream if you dare see for yourself I'm telling you so better get prepared get prepared your in for a scare get prepared your in for a scare (chorus) the dungeons the dragons the goblins on their wagons passing right through along giving off their anguish as I yawn upon the nightly dawn they're preparing for my waking vanquish to scare me til I wake til I vanish The wizards, the witches, the warlocks all on a mission to bring life to a halt an early submission eating away penetrating my cognition its not no superstition it's the mindly television sleepy chronicles edition all timely with precision their ambitionl is my disposition that's their vision to dispose of me in my sleep as I dream steal my power as I scream til their towers filled and complete at the price of my defeat and at the price of my sleep no counting of any sheep this goes deep and yes it's very steep forever falling in that hole it's way too late denial eating at me, along with hate, at my soul in this spiral, in this roll everything falling out of control it's a nightmare attacking at my soul why o why why am I getting trolled? why am I getting trolled? why am I getting trolled? getting trolled... why o why why am I getting trolled? (chorus) the dungeons the dragons the goblins on their wagons passing right through along giving off their anguish as I yawn upon the nightly dawn they're preparing for my waking vanquish to scare me til I wake til I vanish

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2 years ago

Hey @jchic2020, We're gonna review your track 'Nightmare'. Let's get it! "Penetrating my cognition its not no superstition it's the mindly television sleepy chronicles edition" You rhyme scheme worked so well, I felt the pain and struggle coming through within the rhymes themselves, awesome lyricism right here. This track has incredible meaning, well done this will be on repeat! 🤯 The beat is fire, awesome choice. 🧨 Loved the claustrophobic intense piano sounds coming out of that beat too! This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the mic🎤 before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! ✨ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! ‍🔥 - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 💯 We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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