mind on you pt. 1

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mind on you pt. 1

i got my mind on you and its been way too long ya way too long oh cant tell me what to do even when im wrong ya i know im wrong oh Somedays i dont know how to feel, Thoughts race around my head And i cant tell what is real are you still real? Sometimes i wonder why you left What does she have that i couldnt give to you oh you got me feelin blue desperation makes you givin to temptation you are my music- gunnna tune into your station oh darling in need a revelation bout you i got my mind on you x3

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6 years ago

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4 years ago

keep going vibe👍 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

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4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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5 years ago

Yo @madcat______! Waddup. Let's take a look at 'mind on you pt. 1'! 💥 Your vocals are really buried in that mix, try turning them up next time! Your vocals are a lil' unclear, try playing around with your mic position to get the best take. You got potential here, just some parts of the track you're missing the beat. But we know you can do it! 🙏 Any chance you could improve the recording quality, it takes a lot away from your track. With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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check my work Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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@madcat______ it’s good rn but there’s no harm in improving something that you really care bout

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Author
6 years ago

@jawathazagora thanks! i need to redo it!

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😍😍 an 🔥🔥🔥💯💯💯💯 potential and a baddie

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6 years ago

BANGINNNNNN!!!!!🔥💥🔥💥🔥💥

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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

4 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉

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BLESSED 🙏 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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5 years ago

nice Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: On point 🎯

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🔥☝️🔊

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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

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