Paradise
I don’t know when the tides will flow Sometimes I want to go Where I would over flow I said I’m in paradise sitting in my chair out side I said its time to ride but you were down to slide now we out side playing with the guys i thought we were going to slide and now where down to ride I picked up the trash outside Then i sough you in mind Telling me that was a lie I said she a baddie she sitting in her calie I asked her what’s her name she said her name is rotanie I said I called her everyday she said she like my belly and I was living in my granite I need a different type of vibe I saw a shooting star coming down to ride I said She ain’t got no time for no regard I said want to see me slip and slide or a ride her down Yeah Cause I’m liven in paradise I said her name was leanna If we die together is that a problem You know I only do this for my bae and my mama Walking to the bar and I grabs katana If you get it messed up I ain’t the problem I don’t know when the tides will flow Sometimes i want to go Where I would over flow I just don’t really know Tell me where you want to go I can show you what I need know Let’s get straight to the flow I said I’m in paradise sitting in my chair out side I said its time to ride but you were down to slide now we out side playing with the guys i thought we were going to slide and now where down to ride I picked up the trash outside Then I sough you in mind I say I am looking for a bae that can love me cause I can only love you baby if you trust me I am go make this real clear that I’m a thug peace I be jumping out my body Looking for love things You can love me But you can’t trust meee Play around with me and tha team Role around the block and I speeed I said she a baddie she sitting in her calie I asked her what’s her name she said her name is rotanie I said I called her everyday she said she like my belly and I was living in my granite I need a different type of vibe I saw a shooting star coming down to ride I said She ain’t got no time for no regard I said want to see me slip and slide or a ride her down (2•)Cause I’m liven in paradise
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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Hi @cp4life! Welcome to our feedback of 'Paradise '! The rhyming is well put together. Nice meaning behind the track! The beat is fire, nice choice. Solid recording, nicely done! This is super chill, a real nice vibe. Submit more music for feedback from us, we'd love to hear more! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
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I don’t know when the tides will flow Sometimes I want to go Where I would over flow I said I’m in paradise sitting in my chair out side I said its time to ride but you were down to slide now we out side playing with the guys i thought we were going to slide and now where down to ride I picked up the trash outside Then i sough you in mind Telling me that was a lie I said she a baddie she sitting in her calie I asked her what’s her name she said her name is rotanie I said I called her everyday she said she like my belly and I was living in my granite I need a different type of vibe I saw a shooting star coming down to ride I said She ain’t got no time for no regard I said want to see me slip and slide or a ride her down Yeah Cause I’m liven in paradise I said her name was leanna If we die together is that a problem You know I only do this for my bae and my mama Walking to the bar and I grabs katana If you get it messed up I ain’t the problem I don’t know when the tides will flow Sometimes i want to go Where I would over flow I just don’t really know Tell me where you want to go I can show you what I need know Let’s get straight to the flow I said I’m in paradise sitting in my chair out side I said its time to ride but you were down to slide now we out side playing with the guys i thought we were going to slide and now where down to ride I picked up the trash outside Then I sough you in mind I say I am looking for a bae that can love me cause I can only love you baby if you trust me I am go make this real clear that I’m a thug peace I be jumping out my body Looking for love things You can love me But you can’t trust meee Play around with me and tha team Role around the block and I speeed I said she a baddie she sitting in her calie I asked her what’s her name she said her name is rotanie I said I called her everyday she said she like my belly and I was living in my granite I need a different type of vibe I saw a shooting star coming down to ride I said She ain’t got no time for no regard I said want to see me slip and slide or a ride her down (2•)Cause I’m liven in paradise
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
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