Idk what y’all on. Honesty- this isn’t the greatest. Your voice has no vibrancy, work on your delivery that suits the song and beat. Try not cursing they are filler words. Or curse less. Change the tone of the hook and verse. Ad lib… GOOD things, you’re on beat! You can rap a little practice more. You don’t sound like an annoying female rapper. You actually put something out to the world. A lot of people don’t do that. I hope you are good with constructive criticism. I actually listened to this whole song.
Get friends that are better rappers than you and pull all nighters, get a studio, also look for beat that have random words that pop up in the video, that’ll help you rap better! Hmu if you want too
ok. u fye. stay at it. don't get discourage. sit n think n right and get that shyt fine packed and go hard as if u were the star that u are. and most importantly stock to the truth. your truth. peace
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Idk what y’all on. Honesty- this isn’t the greatest. Your voice has no vibrancy, work on your delivery that suits the song and beat. Try not cursing they are filler words. Or curse less. Change the tone of the hook and verse. Ad lib… GOOD things, you’re on beat! You can rap a little practice more. You don’t sound like an annoying female rapper. You actually put something out to the world. A lot of people don’t do that. I hope you are good with constructive criticism. I actually listened to this whole song. Get friends that are better rappers than you and pull all nighters, get a studio, also look for beat that have random words that pop up in the video, that’ll help you rap better! Hmu if you want too
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