make believe

0:00
0:00
make believe

time wont last tare away my mask I'm a psychopath take my hand try and understand illusions grand my love is planned I choose you to feed me all that you could ever be you should run away from me still you stay for what you see but my soul is ugly this wont last I'm a psychopath make believe with me help me sleep help me sleep help me sleep

27 Comments

Leave a comment

Author
6 years ago

See track description ↑

5 years ago

Hey @voldemorty, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'make believe', here are our thoughts 💥 Almost the perfect mix, just take those vocals down a little and we are good to go. There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 The effects you've used make the track stand out, nice job! ⭐ Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

1

amazing Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

1
5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

1
5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥

1
5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

1
5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

1

#swypezkillznum1 Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

1

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

1
1 month ago

DOPE 🍀 FIRE 🔥 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

3 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

4 months ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

1

I feel it! 🤜🤛 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

1

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

1

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

1

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

1

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

1

🗣️

1

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

1
User avatar
3.79k
Total plays
89
Followers
39
Following

You may also like