make believe
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•18 Nov 2020
time wont last tare away my mask I'm a psychopath take my hand try and understand illusions grand my love is planned I choose you to feed me all that you could ever be you should run away from me still you stay for what you see but my soul is ugly this wont last I'm a psychopath make believe with me help me sleep help me sleep help me sleep
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Hey @voldemorty, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'make believe', here are our thoughts 💥 Almost the perfect mix, just take those vocals down a little and we are good to go. There's some real nice flows on here, you just fall off the beat a couple times. 🙏 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 The effects you've used make the track stand out, nice job! ⭐ Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
amazing Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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