Up all night
lil cil99 Plays
•17 Nov 2020
up all night lil cil doing another one ok lets go yh up all night no sleeping up all night no dreaming going down the shops im creeping getting hit by a car they're beeping got that covid mask are u sus no i just done a task grandad he is watching tv granny she is making the best tea what is happening i dont know people getting killed in a row this world is mad its turning into bad yh umm it is a quiet place its like u see no face watching the news people lives are drifting away while people are doing the opposite they pray shout out to storm aidan u already know but he has fungai living under his toes
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Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hi lilcil! Welcome to our feedback of 'Up all night '! Your vocals are the perfect level over the beat, keep mixing like that! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your narrative rapping! Try workin' on the bars to get a fresh lyrical sound! Try workin' on rhymes to get a unique, new sound! Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars! The recordin' quality is a little low, make sure you're using earphones or a headset of some sort if you're not already. You've used a dope balance of clean and explicit language. This track has good energy in it that helps the lyrics come through. Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
@charlestonjackson thank bro
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