shoult out to my ex

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I gave you my trust you threw a back in my fucking face you spat on what we had you stepped on my fucking heart I gave u the benefit of the doubt turns out your a fucking low life people been telling me about That shit u boost about That shit just means your weak ass bitch your a father of 4 your sorry 23 years old ass your a fucking low life that just fucks about no wonder u was so alone you manipulate and control like I fucking puppet 4 long fucking months it took me to see you're more dead inside than me #ex #lowlifebitch #dead #deadtome #rap2020 #lockdownrap #lockdown 2020 #fuckyou

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Bad-girlXBroken-girl

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6 years ago

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MALY OFFICER

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

👑 Queen Fadzdartist 💎

5 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 7/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: Dope 🔥

Nomi

6 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10

TheQuagga

6 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10

Cre Ole

6 years ago

@EmilyAnnElizabethMay But keep going. 👌🏽 glad you express yourself.

Cre Ole

6 years ago

@EmilyAnnElizabethMay Poems have style and rhythm which is the two important things in rap. Rhyme scheme, flow and rhythm to the beat.

Cre Ole

6 years ago

@EmilyAnnElizabethMay I do know what I’m talking about to because I know how to rap. Poems still have a way of rhyming. When it comes to rap you have to rhyme in poetic format. Otherwise it wouldn’t really be rap, especially with out a flow.

Bad-girlXBroken-girl

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6 years ago

@creoledagreat mate u don't know what your chatting about. poems don't have to rhyme and I was expressing my self in this.

Cre Ole

6 years ago

@EmilyAnnElizabethMay That was not rap, that insults. You didn’t have a consistent good flow in a poetic format. Rap was made to express yourself in a poetic way not roasting people and rap battles. That was not what rap was originally intended. Rap battles is dissing whole rhyming in a poetic way. I’ve herd rap before, what I heard wasn’t rap.

Bad-girlXBroken-girl

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6 years ago

@creoledagreat I'm sorry but have u heared rap before. rap was made on roasting people and rap battles

Cre Ole

6 years ago

This ain’t rap, this is just insults.

Sadiq Mohammad

6 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10

🇸🇻machete503 🇸🇻

6 years ago