Yea exactly I mean depending on what your saying that cadence works but this shit is fire you don't wanna bring the mood of it down with your tone this a repeat banger
good bars nice flow work on the cadence a bit you sound bored uno...it works at times I do it too but those lyrics were hype get hype with em make me hype uno
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#work in progress
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10
nice track but you got to go snapping on the beat don't fall back on it
dope track bro 💯 swing by my page
Let’s get a collaboration
💥💥💥💥💪🌚💥💥💥💥 real spill
nice bars, and beats
@Da_Fiend yee all love fam anything to help an artist grow
Ight well thanks for the tips man shit helps @N0T_eXo
@Da_Fiend yee I mean you don't have to but from experience you'll hear it alot and find people will hit shit more if the relate or feel emotion
@N0T_eXo I got ya like with this typa beat and the atmosphere the lyrics create, you need to come with that sorta upbeat energy when you rap it
Yea exactly I mean depending on what your saying that cadence works but this shit is fire you don't wanna bring the mood of it down with your tone this a repeat banger
@N0T_eXo nah I feel you honestly it just needs more energy, get hype with it. Thanks for the feedback man the constructive criticism helps💯
@BMvideo Might be one to watch here
@KingOfPast ight I’ll take that into account when I redo and finish it thank you 🙏
But shits fire fam keep the grind up you got major potential
good bars nice flow work on the cadence a bit you sound bored uno...it works at times I do it too but those lyrics were hype get hype with em make me hype uno
I fw the flow have voice littler louder 🐐💨 🔥
@Da_Fiend dopest song I've listen since day 🔥👏 peep Mines here it's dope >>>#2XXC2
who wanna collab soon