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about a coward who played with the wrong man..#realone #banger #losangeles #lynwood #compton #rap #hiphoplifestyle #hate #bitch #dope #fire #money
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about a coward who played with the wrong man..#realone #banger #losangeles #lynwood #compton #rap #hiphoplifestyle #hate #bitch #dope #fire #money
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Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Dope 🔥
likemothasucka wise sucka. man dude you went out like a female. fighting don't make you a man. boxing is a man's sport. yelling and screaming like a cheerleader is immature but selling a homie out over a hoe. #clownassnature#youarat#facts.
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Hi @supermanzombie! Welcome to our feedback of 'deliver'! We liked the idea behind the track, keep workin' on your stories! The vocals are a little unclear, you may wanna try recording closer to the mic to get a better sound. Work on developing new rhymes to help your music cut through. Try workin' on flows to help show off your bars. Unfortunately the recording hasn't come out too well, it would be great if you could clean that up. Dope beat, really works for this track! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! All the best, The Rap Fame Team
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10 Bars: Great 🎉 Delivery: Great 🎉 Impression: Great 🎉
@DanglesSykotic ok cool
you got a dope flow one of a kind if you can check me out @DVS1
good shit. follow @grimkai #ontheregular #bhk Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 8/10
@cutiepiequeen thank you boo
@NaeGibson much appreciated
@Shadetrey thanks loc
Here are my scores: Impression: 9/10
Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10
@idontfuckwith2facedmfsnakesmadhatefuckyoucocksuckers GRACIAS I appreciate it 👊
Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10
@HGramz @DontBlinkDAOfficial @hjay @hjay thanks homie I appreciate it
Follow me if you want a good score. plz help and follow me and join my crew. you will be blessed by dont blink. Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10
Write something... Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 9/10