grown thoughts

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the look in ya eyes really got me thinkin different.. and if ya ready baby maybe you could be my mrs.. against the world girl its with you i wanna stand make a forever thing girl i wanna be ya man.. let me take ya hand n lets go and tie the knot for the rest of my life im givin you all i got. the love i wanna give to you it wont ever stop.. you got that butta love call it cream of the crop. you aint a basic woman thats why i call you queen look at em starin at ya soon as we hit the scene.. the kinda love you give got me feelin elevated aint no kinda way it could be perpetrated so till the end loyalty is demonstrated and all these jealous women lookin know they gon hate it.. because you mine im only gonna lift you higher you got my heart singin out like the church choir to make you happy and secure is my desire we got the gas so lets gon n light the fire

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Geo Jr.

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8 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @GeoBensonJr, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'grown thoughts', here are our thoughts 💥 Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 This track has a nice rhythm to it. Great flows! Good choice of beat! 🎼 The recording quality ain't great on this one, can you try find a way to improve it? We have a bunch of options to really add to your track, try using some effects on your vocals next time! Put a bit more into your next track, we can see your talent! 👌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Mystery¿

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Unpretentious

4 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Debo.Da.Don

4 years ago

smooth shit family....#elevinthirty Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

TWERK_MF_TEEZ

4 years ago

CHECC MY SHIT OUT WHEN YOU GET THE CHANCE 💯 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥