Untold Story

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Untold Story

His untold story Kept inside all his life Feeling trapped, filled with passion and seeking Christ! Trying to hold on, no palm to extend my arm, I brace the fall, body curled like a ball! Never felt the impact I still continue to drop! So here I am impaling the track with spit venomous to the whack! My life is limited, so I spit Special edition and rip any new additions, history in the making, untold stories finally naked, pressure inside bursts and began flaming! An unintended pain being concealed within. Sometimes when I feel the wind, I wonder what it would be like to glide the skies, leave and free the mind, beliefs I could try to find Come to terms with the feelings that reside inside, All my life I've been living an untold story, book unfolds but the pages empty! Establishment vacant! Vision with no creations! Sublime life until it's faded! The untold story in the making Still hidden in the open! Less focus, less notice! I'm outspoken, use tounge with no hesitation, "blunt" like gas pump stations! It's in me to asK for help, give me a hand and we just flipped the "M" What's life without risk? I keep a closed fist, I know my friends! It's hard to let in, easy to leave! What's a relation mean when it's sunken, do we fix or abandon ship? We're we targeted or destroyed by our own hands? Unspoken thoughts leaked from my pen and left a mark I can't wash off, Some words better left unsaid, Bullet to the head, now let the story spread! -RB #tormentedmindz

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4 years ago

Bars: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

storytelling bars.. gshyt Bars: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐Ÿ’ฏ

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Bars: On point ๐ŸŽฏ Delivery: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ Impression: Dope ๐Ÿ”ฅ

@RickyBwavy Your Welcome NP

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7 years ago

@A1demeyes thank you so much !

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yes so deeply๐ŸŽค๐Ÿ˜Ž๐ŸŽง๐Ÿ’ฏ

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7 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 6/10 Impression: 6/10

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7 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 10/10 Impression: 10/10

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7 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 9/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10

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7 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 7/10 Delivery: 8/10 Impression: 7/10

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7 years ago

@dripmtz5 don't forget to hit the L ๐Ÿ’ฏ

7 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 10/10 Delivery: 5/10 Impression: 7/10

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7 years ago

@callmelyon ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ–๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ–๏ธ๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ–๏ธ๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ’ฏ๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ–๏ธ๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿšฎ๐Ÿšฏ๐Ÿšฎ๐Ÿšฏ๐Ÿšป๐Ÿšณ

7 years ago

"The visions without creations" " The untold story in the making" ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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7 years ago

this was official....beat and voice was at a nice lvl ...and those words are empowering bro... strong messages...I'mma go bump this again just off of respect ๐Ÿ™๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ’ช๐Ÿพ๐Ÿค˜๐Ÿพ๐Ÿค™๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ–๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ–๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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i feel this homie gs

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7 years ago

@Factsalive @Kiekzo good looks familiar I appreciate the feed back! let's keep hip-hop alive!!

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7 years ago

Here are my scores: Bars: 8/10 Delivery: 9/10 Impression: 8/10

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7 years ago

@Bhadbishop_x what's good fam

7 years ago

I here u spiting bars fam ๐Ÿ”ฅ

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