Untold Story
His untold story Kept inside all his life Feeling trapped, filled with passion and seeking Christ! Trying to hold on, no palm to extend my arm, I brace the fall, body curled like a ball! Never felt the impact I still continue to drop! So here I am impaling the track with spit venomous to the whack! My life is limited, so I spit Special edition and rip any new additions, history in the making, untold stories finally naked, pressure inside bursts and began flaming! An unintended pain being concealed within. Sometimes when I feel the wind, I wonder what it would be like to glide the skies, leave and free the mind, beliefs I could try to find Come to terms with the feelings that reside inside, All my life I've been living an untold story, book unfolds but the pages empty! Establishment vacant! Vision with no creations! Sublime life until it's faded! The untold story in the making Still hidden in the open! Less focus, less notice! I'm outspoken, use tounge with no hesitation, "blunt" like gas pump stations! It's in me to asK for help, give me a hand and we just flipped the "M" What's life without risk? I keep a closed fist, I know my friends! It's hard to let in, easy to leave! What's a relation mean when it's sunken, do we fix or abandon ship? We're we targeted or destroyed by our own hands? Unspoken thoughts leaked from my pen and left a mark I can't wash off, Some words better left unsaid, Bullet to the head, now let the story spread! -RB #tormentedmindz
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"The visions without creations" " The untold story in the making" ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฅ
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