As far as this track goes, I’ll say the same as I said in the above track. Work on your delivery. You also have an idea of lyrics you want for a song, but I want you to try to think of better ways to say them. The rhymes are a little too simple. Use your imagination more and try to tell a story instead if anything. Reflect on personal experiences you might have. If you don’t have any really, then try to draw inspiration from other people’s experiences or even things you might see in your day to day life or on tv. Make what you’re saying more enjoyable and creative to give it more substance.
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listen to your heart is a original piece by my self it is on YouTube.
I like it homie. nice flow real life bars Salute brother
Yo i like to hear this vibe of music bro good work keep it up!
I like your Rythum
this is really good. my favorite one
need love on my new track g after u hear it tell u if u wanna clab
As far as this track goes, I’ll say the same as I said in the above track. Work on your delivery. You also have an idea of lyrics you want for a song, but I want you to try to think of better ways to say them. The rhymes are a little too simple. Use your imagination more and try to tell a story instead if anything. Reflect on personal experiences you might have. If you don’t have any really, then try to draw inspiration from other people’s experiences or even things you might see in your day to day life or on tv. Make what you’re saying more enjoyable and creative to give it more substance.
This on Fire fam
i really dig the sample on this 1 😎💪 good choice
love it
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not bad