Bro, I didn’t know this was supposed to be a song or just a skit, but in my opinion, the delivery is off with the reverb or echo or whatever you have on it no offense. As far as the overall impression goes I just didn’t know where you were going with the subject matter. I couldn’t really grab it for bars, but still gave you something for it because there was no rhyming that I heard in it.
Like I said no offense, I’m just trying to give you some pointers
Bars: Nice 🌟
Delivery: Can improve 👏
Impression: Can improve 👏
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fie spitter flow great art great quality
keep grindin the bars and workin on your delivery
Bro, I didn’t know this was supposed to be a song or just a skit, but in my opinion, the delivery is off with the reverb or echo or whatever you have on it no offense. As far as the overall impression goes I just didn’t know where you were going with the subject matter. I couldn’t really grab it for bars, but still gave you something for it because there was no rhyming that I heard in it. Like I said no offense, I’m just trying to give you some pointers Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏
Um I dont know 🧐 Impression: Can improve 👏
Ayy this is fire not gonna lie Champion 🏆 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Everyone In the crib yo
This is the A doggy you're here
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: On point 🎯
Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: On point 🎯
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
hell no
I’m feeling this ❤️ Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯