I liked your overtime line. It fit well with the flow but I kind of feel like the flow was choppy because you were trying to emphasize the words. If it was aca with no beat then it would work but I suggest to focus on making your flow match the beat instead of chopping up the flow to emphasize the words if that makes any senseπ€ππ½π₯π―πΆπ€
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I liked your overtime line. It fit well with the flow but I kind of feel like the flow was choppy because you were trying to emphasize the words. If it was aca with no beat then it would work but I suggest to focus on making your flow match the beat instead of chopping up the flow to emphasize the words if that makes any senseπ€ππ½π₯π―πΆπ€
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