yo your delivery should be like a punch in the face. you want to grab the listeners attention from the start. as far as the verse goes it needs to be longer and have some feeling behind it. be animated...people want to be entertained. keep working and don't ever give up

DIRTYHARRY REDRUMOG187

4 years ago

bust Dem raps lil g 187 send em he'll fuk jail cell

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hi @.7610899! Here's a couple tips for your track 'see it'! 💥 1. This was a good start! Feel like once you get a decent amount of practice in you'll be droppin' bangers left and right! 2. Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! ❤️‍🔥 3. Your track could really benefit from a headset to improve the recording quality! 🎧 4. Rap Fame defo has some powerful effects 🚀 Keep using 'em, but remember less can be more when it comes to the mixing stage! 5. Use denoise on your vocal to reduce the background noise on your track! Keep up the hard work, we can't wait to hear your next fire track! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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