it's a cold world
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•26 Aug 2022
Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.
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Hey @jamaalferguson2112, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'it's a cold world', here are our thoughts 💥 Well done on completing a masterclass, these are a dope way to improve and level up your rap skills! Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. 🌠 When someone just wants to chill, this is the song they should listen to. Such a vibe! 🌊 Turn the beat down a little, and the vocals up, your lyrics are being drowned out right now! Remember to review your track before posting to ensure the listening experience is good! Try another masterclass and play with them volumes next! This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the mic🎤 before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! ✨ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! 🔥 - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 💯 Thanks for submitting music for us to listen to, we can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Dope 🔥
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Dope 🔥
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