it's a cold world

Name: it's a cold world
Description: Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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Life is hard, Hope I make it, It’s a risk, But I’ll take it, Feeling like I’m living Stuck in the basement, I’m just trying To get a higher placement, Life is hard, But I’ll make it, I can’t wait a long time I’m anxious, I’ve just gotta get off The pavement, So they hear me across The nation, Life is hard.

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Jamaal Ferguson

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4 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @jamaalferguson2112, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'it's a cold world', here are our thoughts 💥 Well done on completing a masterclass, these are a dope way to improve and level up your rap skills! Using a headset will hugely improve the recording quality here, consider giving it a try! 🎧 Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 Your timing is perfect, you're landing perfectly on the beat. 🌠 When someone just wants to chill, this is the song they should listen to. Such a vibe! 🌊 Turn the beat down a little, and the vocals up, your lyrics are being drowned out right now! Remember to review your track before posting to ensure the listening experience is good! Try another masterclass and play with them volumes next! This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the mic🎤 before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! ✨ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! ‍🔥 - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! 🌊 - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! 💯 Thanks for submitting music for us to listen to, we can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

TIMELESS

4 years ago

Couldn’t hear a word or anything you said.

jdior97

4 years ago

Needs to record better Bars: Nice 🌟 Delivery: Good 💛 Impression: Good 💛

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4 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Wassup @jamaalferguson.7584174, Thank you for sharing 'it's a cold world' with our community 💥. Here are a few words to the wise from us: 1. Try recording a video on Rap Fame! Here you can show off your talent for rapping & performing! 📹 2. Try recording when you're feeling yourself! The feel good vibes will come out in your raps! 3. Make sure you put headphones in on your next track as the feedback is affecting the recording quality! 4. If you're lookin' for a bit of extra sizzle, try out some of our vocal FX. 5. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! Overall this just eat fam! Can't wait to see what else you drop! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

jflames.4996

8 days ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

ShizzaShark Entertainment

9 days ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Big Balla

3 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

J-SAINT Beatz

5 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥