Destiny
Destiny

snippy

snippy

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25 Aug 2022

locked up in this cell Trapped in living hell I had to stay out so I could fucking keep my sell Had to get my ass up and make that money I had to get the cash come on you looking so bummy Knocking asking for handouts maybe it’s cause I’m dripping out maybe it’s yo background I love to make these trap sounds Cups all over the ground Drinking all the way around. body in the ground pocket getting bigger want it to be a mound Rolling up this dope Will def make you choke Put this plastic in your holes And this metal in their domes Fake bitches be fake bitches Until you leave them alone Take them to our home Make them feel our chrome Not even gold I don’t even care I still look fresher than anyone here she be scratching my back and screaming in my ear Cutting off braziers .. 7 inch blade Leave you full of fucking fear cut your neck off like I was using sheers Will see y’all next year I’ll be hiding in the back with the henny real good I been doing what I should

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2 years ago

Hi there @dangthatbag420, Here's some feedback on your track 'snippy', thank you for sharing with us! 💥 "locked up in this cell Trapped in living hell" great intro to the track, really set the scene and got across your emotion. We like the rhyming, it's tight. ✨ Love the natural sounding flow here. Very cool! 🎶 You and this beat is like yin and yang! Amazing choice and the echoey piano sounds really added depth to your vocals! This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Using headphones will cut out the feedback and really help the quality. 🎧 You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. 🤟 We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

2 years ago

😍🥰😘

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