Kickin It
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•24 Aug 2022
tell me how you want me to kick it I can flip it like a flap jack snap back like an unfitted hat get that wick whack shit crap away from me sorry I had to be the one to tell you but basically your garbage flow can't hold water to a real artist yo momma let show how to really rock a mic and when I'm done you know I drop the mic are you having fun I can do this all night man I'm on the run tryna live a good life all these mother fuckers around me really wanna act hood right keep fuckin with me I'ma make sure you get a good night sleep I'ma beast and these beats are just treats I eat emcees for breakfast lunch and dinner in crunch time I'm the winner each punch line a beginner for the next I get thinner just to flex on you fat boys need to run a lap if you ever wanna run a rap with me no cap boy I'm a killa ILLA gorilla mother fuckers just beatin my chest I haven't even eaten what's left on my plate don't stress my fate man it's God's plan I'ma just work hard and do the best I can then bless you with bars fam
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Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
I always knew you were the one the Lord chose! Killa Illa Guerilla 🦍🦍🦍🦍🦍
Hi @ill420! Welcome to our feedback of 'Kickin It'! 💥 "Let show how to really rock a mic and when I'm done you know I drop the mic, are you having fun I can do this all night" 💯 We like the lyrics, they're put together real well. 🙌 The rhyming is well put together. ✨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. 👍 "I'ma just work hard and do the best I can" - we love this attitude 💪 Man, these flows are unreal! Seriously impressive to create flows this complex without leaving the beat! Your wordplay is dope, the flow switch-ups are real engaging, you have some serious talent well done! Keep working on that audio quality, and maybe add a hook to break the bars up some more and provide a memorable sequence that gets stuck in the listener's head! ⭐Key improvement to help your track get featured: keep working on that audio quality to make ios as crisp as possible, and try making this more of a song, add a hook and another verse maybe! Submit more for feedback with us to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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