Crooked Ways
ColdLightIce193 Plays
•20 Aug 2022
Sleeping while im creepin out the door I don't wanna live life any more what should I do because im kinda getting bored and stressed out most people out here need to watch their mouth and what they say you can get killed or tracked down any day who am I to say ive done it before but make sure you dont fuck with these whores coming out the closet not in no gay way what else can i say that will lead me to greatness guess all I gotta do is pray every night wishing and dissing for all my enemies to die and to walk away what I am afraid ill be the last one standing out the gate is this fate or is this my last day to be alive say goodbye cuz im not coming back to this land its crazy i need mors bibles and shit but I get to lazy to read to write to pray god forgive me for my crooked ways #2022 #new #rapfame @rapfame @rapfamebest
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Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥
Hey @coldicelight, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'Crooked Ways', here are our thoughts 💥 Your bars are real good, keep doin' what your doin'. 🙌 Your rhyming is tight. ✨ Great concept. Love the story your bars tell! "Most people out here need to watch their mouth" - you just giving a gentle warning to people out there not to F with you! Clean flow here, it really adds some serious sauce to your song. 🎶 Nice timing! Never left the beat once! Good choice of beat as well! 🎼 The guitar on this one is so catchy! You really aced it with the album artwork too! Looking like a pro release (apart from the angry emoji!) You're a few tweaks away from being very good! Keep putting the work in and you'll get there! We can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯
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