your lyrics need work your delivery need work your mes got no point take more time to ✍️ your bars and lyrics you don't got to rush my boy take time to make your music 🎵🎶 stand out it's important to treat this shit like a job 24/7 feel me don't let my opinions discourage you I'm not talking from you just giving good advice go harder!
it's MILITIASQUAD
Hey @rllback,
Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'arena'! 💥
"I need a deal, I got the skills" 💯 You got great bars here. 🙌 Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 try switch the flows up some more, or the speed of your delivery, it's kind of the same throughout!
We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The snares are poppin' 🥁
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. This would really help improve the track!
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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get them racks like Serena in arena
your lyrics need work your delivery need work your mes got no point take more time to ✍️ your bars and lyrics you don't got to rush my boy take time to make your music 🎵🎶 stand out it's important to treat this shit like a job 24/7 feel me don't let my opinions discourage you I'm not talking from you just giving good advice go harder! it's MILITIASQUAD
Hey @rllback, Thanks for the submission, here's our thoughts on 'arena'! 💥 "I need a deal, I got the skills" 💯 You got great bars here. 🙌 Tight rhymes, love the structure here. ✨ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! 🎶 try switch the flows up some more, or the speed of your delivery, it's kind of the same throughout! We like this beat with your voice! You know how to choose 'em! The snares are poppin' 🥁 The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. This would really help improve the track! We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
dope 🔥🔥🔥 keep that energy burning check out #wizvix
working on your timing to match the best fam other then that good job 👏
bumping, sounds good keep flowing homie!
thanks I appreciate it 💯🙏🏽💪🏾😁
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