Hey @melford,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'hoe handler '! 💥
Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧
"Wake up in the morning, all I think about is $ signs" 💰🤑Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. ✨ The song clearly means something to you, we really think users will engage with this. 👍
Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 You got aa smoooooth flow on this, riding this beat real well 🏄♂️
We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 Maybe add a hook to break your bars up and add a 'memorable' line from the track! A bit like what you did at the end!
⭐Key improvement to help your track get featured: Try switch that flow up some more, and maybe change up the emotion within your delivery just to keep the listener engaged!
We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
keep doing what you doing Dougie you want to collab with battle holler at your boy crazy Mike that's me for real though see my name is flex like I just took a steroid pill bro
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sounds good @melford LIKE SOME TRUE HIP-HOP
Hey @melford, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'hoe handler '! 💥 Get your headphones plugged in if you want to see a big increase in the quality of your track. 🎧 "Wake up in the morning, all I think about is $ signs" 💰🤑Love those rhymes, keep that poetry flowin'. ✨ The song clearly means something to you, we really think users will engage with this. 👍 Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 You got aa smoooooth flow on this, riding this beat real well 🏄♂️ We like how the beat sounds with your voice. 🎼 Maybe add a hook to break your bars up and add a 'memorable' line from the track! A bit like what you did at the end! ⭐Key improvement to help your track get featured: Try switch that flow up some more, and maybe change up the emotion within your delivery just to keep the listener engaged! We really appreciate the time you put into your track. Can't wait to hear what you come up with next! All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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