Wassup @mommaslayer69,
Thank you for sharing 'who is you??' with our community ๐ฅ. Here is a little feedback from us:
Congratulations, we love your song and we added it to our "Rap Fame Fire ๐ฅ Playlist"!
This time you just missed out on Featuring โญ here's what you can do to make it next time:
Your freestyle game is dope fam! Congrats on making the Rap Fame Fire Playlist! Sound like you using the Rap Fame Studio to the best of your ability! The ad libs and vocals are strong on here! The quality from the mic isn't the best but your freestyling picks up the bulk of the slack from this shortcoming. Rap Fame Fire placement is a strong indicator that you can take what you used in the studio and be challenged build on it for that Featured tag by doing things like re-recording the song with better quality vocals, mix, and presentation (album art) representing yourself as a brand and thinking about your image as an artist.
Delivery and wordplay was dope! You got clear vocal takes but the quality could just be better and you really could dig in with the flow you used!
Your vocals sound fire, great recording on this!
Great beat choice, really works with the track!
You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! ๐ค
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Wassup @mommaslayer69, Thank you for sharing 'who is you??' with our community ๐ฅ. Here is a little feedback from us: Congratulations, we love your song and we added it to our "Rap Fame Fire ๐ฅ Playlist"! This time you just missed out on Featuring โญ here's what you can do to make it next time: Your freestyle game is dope fam! Congrats on making the Rap Fame Fire Playlist! Sound like you using the Rap Fame Studio to the best of your ability! The ad libs and vocals are strong on here! The quality from the mic isn't the best but your freestyling picks up the bulk of the slack from this shortcoming. Rap Fame Fire placement is a strong indicator that you can take what you used in the studio and be challenged build on it for that Featured tag by doing things like re-recording the song with better quality vocals, mix, and presentation (album art) representing yourself as a brand and thinking about your image as an artist. Delivery and wordplay was dope! You got clear vocal takes but the quality could just be better and you really could dig in with the flow you used! Your vocals sound fire, great recording on this! Great beat choice, really works with the track! You've got the talent. Just give it a lil' more work and this track will be fire!! ๐ค We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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