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"I'm on my sh*t like a baby wipe you can get hit see stars but I get stripes" man this hook went hard! You got the word play, the humour, the power all in one and it went all through your verses too. The bars are just awesome!! We love 'em, keep writin' like that. β¨
Super beat choice, it really makes your track stand out! 𧨠Especially that simple piano melody, really grabbed me.
βKey improvement to help your track get featured:
The beat is great but a lil' too loud for your vocals, try putting it down to get the balance right.
You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€
We hope to hear more from you!
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Mr.Confident - BABY WIPE
Hey @mcptv, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Mr.Confident - BABY WIPE'! π₯ "I'm on my sh*t like a baby wipe you can get hit see stars but I get stripes" man this hook went hard! You got the word play, the humour, the power all in one and it went all through your verses too. The bars are just awesome!! We love 'em, keep writin' like that. β¨ Super beat choice, it really makes your track stand out! 𧨠Especially that simple piano melody, really grabbed me. βKey improvement to help your track get featured: The beat is great but a lil' too loud for your vocals, try putting it down to get the balance right. You've got talent for sure, we think this track just needs a few tweaks to really showcase that. π€ We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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