taking a tumble

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hey........................................ young soul don't worry don't let your troubled mind go leading you a stray lost on these paves wondering a-long tha way but................................ hey, within you you have tha power tha chance too, stop!! change start again, anytime you ain't liking tha way your living ain't right trying to put on ah brave face than most, that won't admit......... just what it takes to make too take tha first step so before u start fronting, bitching an complaining, grutting and moaning saying life is hard, or something along that line that's time, tha moment, when your at your lowest take a breather too reflect now it's been rough N tough taking a tumble when we fall in love has never been dull moment plus all tha commotion rocking n rolling like tha ocean I realize 4 some maybe ah challenge but it's all in your mind why of course he gave tha body a soul so there is still hope faith for u yet living on a prayer thank tha good LORD for sending, his beloved son to save tha world, from, some evil and some My Life of Sins transgressions based on choices bad decisions cleaning out my closet of skeletons an addictions repenting asking please fix this accidental sincere mistake it didn't start out this way now it's been rough N tough taking a tumble when we fall in love has never been a dull moment plus all tha commotion rocking n rolling like tha ocean

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S.J.W

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4 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @shazkazam77, Thanks for the submission, we listened to 'taking a tumble ', here are our thoughts 💥 The beat is a lil' too loud for your vocals, try putting it down to get the balance right. "Never been dull moment plus all that commotion rocking and rolling like the ocean" 🌊Nice bars! Your rhyming is tight. ✨ You've clearly thought of the meaning behind your track so listeners can relate. 👍 Dope delivery, the track flows real nice. 🎶 Great beat choice, really works with the track! It helps give it the laid back vibe 😎 Keep working on that audio quality, the better it is, the more your track will pop off! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

6 Tha Psycho

4 years ago

Sounds thoughfull and positive. Would be better if you delivered my aggresojc Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Can improve 👏 Impression: Can improve 👏

CALY29

3 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Wacco Hyp

3 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Elijah Thomas

5 months ago

This track is a testament to your dedication. You're making waves! 🌊🎶 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥