Hey @1amdc,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'NoTears '! 💥
Definitely love the cadence you used on this song. It works for you for sure! There are some lines you could have laid down more better in other words said it with a bit more jest; practice displaying more passion when you freestyle; will make a huge change in playback value.
Also the vocals need to be turned up a lil bit; make sure you try not to move as much when you're rapping because the mic hears all of that!
Where the dope at, I need it like a Tupac verse!!! Crazy line! Definitely a smooth freestyle fam! Love how you seamlessly transition into the hook after the verse and vice versa!
Loved listening to this track, we hope our feedback is useful to you and we are looking forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team 😎
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Hey @1amdc, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'NoTears '! 💥 Definitely love the cadence you used on this song. It works for you for sure! There are some lines you could have laid down more better in other words said it with a bit more jest; practice displaying more passion when you freestyle; will make a huge change in playback value. Also the vocals need to be turned up a lil bit; make sure you try not to move as much when you're rapping because the mic hears all of that! Where the dope at, I need it like a Tupac verse!!! Crazy line! Definitely a smooth freestyle fam! Love how you seamlessly transition into the hook after the verse and vice versa! Loved listening to this track, we hope our feedback is useful to you and we are looking forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎
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