Hi @slim3x!
Welcome to our feedback of 'patient of the state'! ๐ฅ
Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little!
You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off!
Good choice of beat! ๐ผ
The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time.
To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible!
We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! ๐ค
We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
this song is amazing bro the lyrics are not bad at all and this is pre written or freestyle? can't tell
Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ
Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ
Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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Hi @slim3x! Welcome to our feedback of 'patient of the state'! ๐ฅ Your vocals sound a bit messy on this, try moving your mic around a little! You're a bit off beat at times, try recording, listening back and correcting the parts where you're off! Good choice of beat! ๐ผ The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. To really enhance this track we suggest making your vocals sound as crisp as possible! We see the potential here, with a few adjustments we can see the room for progression! ๐ค We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! ๐ช All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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this song is amazing bro the lyrics are not bad at all and this is pre written or freestyle? can't tell Bars: Perfect ๐ฏ Delivery: Perfect ๐ฏ Impression: Perfect ๐ฏ
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