Private (16:47)

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gas flabber how many demons intakes to assassinate the reaper man at round table i count five snakes i was half baked these niggas ain't really with me i hear it in my memories from the sand box we cooked our first gram up Miley Cyrus Tan Mom James Brown which ever color it came out the first twenty four we sold out and i ain't gone hold back the first time we sold crack we staying were the moes be at you kno wer his mouth hit a swerve oh on a nerd a little bitty purple I smoke before I hit my target good price off the market hold up wait they don't f****** hear me flabbergasted attitudes I mix it up that red and blue I call it there that super I'll have a purple flu and I'm here for a purpose too don't get your f****** mental confused as you can see the devil the reaper man smoke his ass or Jason mask just passed the gas to the right of stinky ass Mr Hankey leave you stanky

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TELO LAW

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4 years ago

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ARAPparition™️ AKAWalter White

4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Kidd Cre$t

4 years ago

Pretty dope yo I could fw it keep grindin Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

Double G

4 years ago

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Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hi @teamflea! Welcome to our feedback of 'Private (16:47)'! 💥 We were "Flabbergasted" by all your bars on this track. It went hard and you were spitting fire from start to finish. Great rhyme scheme, love how them words fall and the flows were Epic ! What you're doing sounds effortless, we love it. 🎆 It's like someone made this beat for your bars! Well chosen, it was so hype made it sound like you were in a super hero movie. This time you just missed out on Featuring 🌟, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Sound quality is key when it comes to all forms of music! Try and develop on what you got now for your next release! 💯 With a few changes you can really be a top rapper, just keep learning and progressing. 🤟 We hope our feedback is useful to you and we look forward to hearing what track you release next! 🙌 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Yolo 🅱️rim 🩸🩸

4 years ago

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Antdont Settleforless

4 years ago

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🇨🇦 Platinum Phantom 🇨🇦

4 years ago

fire track bro 🔥 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

DISCONNECT I GET EVEN

3 months ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥