Hi @elpookie818!
Welcome to our feedback of '#THE_DEAD_One'! π₯
Your bars are good, keep it up! π "I'm going insane I'm going crazy without you.." - we can feel your pain in the words you're saying!
Try switching up the flow to convey your words even better, take a listen to some of your fav artists for inspiration and apply it to your own bars!
The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. You could also add some light autotune to the melodic elements to make this one pop even more!
Loving the beat selection, good ear! Some sci-fi sounds all over this one!
Rating the whip! This is some dope album artwork!
This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! π
We hope to hear more from you!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hi @elpookie818! Welcome to our feedback of '#THE_DEAD_One'! π₯ Your bars are good, keep it up! π "I'm going insane I'm going crazy without you.." - we can feel your pain in the words you're saying! Try switching up the flow to convey your words even better, take a listen to some of your fav artists for inspiration and apply it to your own bars! The overall quality is pretty low, try changing some things to improve the recording. You could also add some light autotune to the melodic elements to make this one pop even more! Loving the beat selection, good ear! Some sci-fi sounds all over this one! Rating the whip! This is some dope album artwork! This might not be your best track, but keep trying and you'll be there in no time! π We hope to hear more from you! All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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