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I'm a break um in like new shoes all these b***** cryin like boo who keep it in line or dude ooh you don't wanna know what'll happen with this rappin I'm an og baby flows be crazy so be swayze just know it's me lately and I keep it a hundred you know you know you don't really want it with me when I kick it you punt it and I flip it you front it I'm sick of the shit that you've done is its only a matter of time I call you a c*** b**** what

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ILLA

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4 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

What's up @ill420, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'okay '! 💥 Your bars are dope, we like how you put 'em all together. 🙌 You're getting really close to having your timing on the beat perfect, you're just a bit off in places. 🙏 Great choice of beat, this is pairing very well with your delivery style. 🎼 Can you improve the quality of your recording somehow? It will really improve the sound of your tracks. Break it in like new shoes - what a lit starting bar! You have a lot of potential, but this track is hella short and your flow is affected by the poor recording quality! Keep on it! You clearly got the goods, just a few little things and this track will be there. 🤟 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

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4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

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4 years ago

Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Pony Rap 🦄💔

4 years ago

Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

LeashTheSavage

4 years ago

Bars: On point 🎯 Delivery: On point 🎯 Impression: On point 🎯