I don't know if you did it on purpose but the first couple of bars made me want hear more
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What's up @markenaluckey,
Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'marbena'! π₯
Feelin' the bars here, we like it! Tight rhymes, love the structure here. β¨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π
Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ
We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ
We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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I don't know if you did it on purpose but the first couple of bars made me want hear more Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
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What's up @markenaluckey, Thanks for the submission, let's have a look at 'marbena'! π₯ Feelin' the bars here, we like it! Tight rhymes, love the structure here. β¨ You've thought about what you're trying to say in this track and it shows, nicely done. π Your voice flows nicely over the track. Well delivered!! πΆ We think you chose the right beat for this track, suits your style perfectly. πΌ We loved listening to your music, please share with us again! πͺ All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
Dope shit bro. π― Make sure you make a second verse though ππ―π―π― Bars: Perfect π― Delivery: Perfect π― Impression: Perfect π―
dope bars you got going π there π₯ keep me posted
Raw talent you out here killing and slaying would have wanted to hear a longer verse but we will have to wait for the mixtape to come out
dope track bro keep it up make sure you follow me for more support
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