Hey @pastormcf,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'ONE TIME (Ta Mikes interlude)'! ๐ฅ
"One time for my guys, who be living in the sky" ๐ฏ We like the bars, well written! Some seriously impressive rhyming in here, you know what you're doing for sure. We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. ๐
Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! ๐ถ
This is a nice interlude, real relaxing vibe to this one, the beat and your flow are calming!
This time you just missed out on Featuring ๐, but here's what you can do to make it next time:
- Try and test out the distance between you and the mic๐ค before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! โจ
- Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! โ๐ฅ
- Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! ๐
- The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! ๐ฏ
Thanks for submitting music for us to listen to, we can't wait to hear what else you got in store!
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team ๐
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Hey @pastormcf, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'ONE TIME (Ta Mikes interlude)'! ๐ฅ "One time for my guys, who be living in the sky" ๐ฏ We like the bars, well written! Some seriously impressive rhyming in here, you know what you're doing for sure. We appreciate the idea behind this track, nicely done. ๐ Your delivery is smooth, great flows here! ๐ถ This is a nice interlude, real relaxing vibe to this one, the beat and your flow are calming! This time you just missed out on Featuring ๐, but here's what you can do to make it next time: - Try and test out the distance between you and the mic๐ค before recording, this can make a huge difference to the quality! โจ - Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! โ๐ฅ - Remember to add dope cover art to your tracks to really show off your image and vibes! ๐ - The best rappers take advice on board to improve! Make sure you engage with the Rap Fame community to help you shine bright! ๐ฏ Thanks for submitting music for us to listen to, we can't wait to hear what else you got in store! All the best, The Rap Fame Team ๐
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