Hey @lilweed123,
Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Come and smoke with us'! π₯
Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π
Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π
Good choice of beat here! πΌ
Try improving your recording quality if you can.
We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. π
It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π
All the best,
The Rap Fame Team π
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Hey @lilweed123, Thanks for the submission, let's dive into some feedback for 'Come and smoke with us'! π₯ Dope idea, we enjoyed the story of the track. π Smooth delivery here, keep it up! πΆ Focus on maintaining that flow throughout, you're just a little off beat a couple of times. π Good choice of beat here! πΌ Try improving your recording quality if you can. We can see the potential there, keep hustlin' and your tracks will improve in no time. π It was great listening to your track, we hope to see a lot more of you in the future, please feel free to share some more tracks with us! π All the best, The Rap Fame Team π
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