À mon père

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Lorsque la lumière s’éteint Et que le public est attentif Le soleil restait dehors paraît si lointain La noirceur prend soudain un petit air narratif Quand tu as rejoint les anges Je pensais que c’était la fin Je ne voyais plus ce joli mésange Les quatre saisons n’y changeraient rien Lorsque les rideaux se ferment Les spectateurs applaudissent Pas de robe noire et de chrysanthèmes Pour moi tu fais toujours partie du box office Je ressens à nouveau le soleil Je peux revoir son reflet par terre Ses rayons si chauds me balayent Comme le vent n’est que poussière

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selphie vision BEN

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4 years ago

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

Hey @selphievisionben! Thanks for sharing 'À mon père ' with us! 💥 Your vocals are a little unclear, maybe try recording closer to the mic? Nice timing! You were almost always on the beat. Loving the beat selection, good ear! The track isn't helped by the recording quality, try cleaning that up next time. There are some nice effects in our mobile studio, like Autotune and Reverb. Why don't you try them? Keep working on your tracks, practise makes perfect! 👌 We enjoyed listening to your music, please share with us again! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Hoot130

4 years ago

Keep doing your thing give me a follow Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Jayyworld

4 years ago

🔥🔥💯 Bars: Perfect 💯 Delivery: Perfect 💯 Impression: Perfect 💯

Ice trip

4 years ago

check my new track bro

Ice trip

4 years ago

yessssssssir , l don't know your language but l love the melody and your beat o hope we can wake with each other sometimes 💯💯😋

cadmus

4 years ago

dope track bro keep it up make sure you follow me for more support

Rap Fame A&R

4 years ago

What's up @selphievisionben, Thanks for the sharing 'À mon père ', here's our two cents on uploading tracks to Rap Fame! 💥 1. Recording quality matters fam! Make sure you don't let your excitement cloud your judgement! Release your tracks when they ready! 🤟 2. Be yourself! True authenticity can really make people fall in love with your music! ❤️‍🔥 3. Try adding some of our built in audio effects which could really help boost this track! 4. Try using our denoise feature to reduce the background noise from your device! Send your track to hot for some constructive feedback from us, to see how you're progressing! 💪 All the best, The Rap Fame Team 😎

Jay Villin

15 days ago

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DONMONEYTRAXXS

6 months ago

ISSA MOVIE 🎥 Bars: Dope 🔥 Delivery: Dope 🔥 Impression: Dope 🔥

SexyslimThegoddess🧿🔙sender

9 months ago

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4 years ago

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